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Plot Submission -16;-8

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I'm back with another plot submission. :p
This is also a terraformer submission.

This plot is a forest with lots of small changes in the elevation. It has two creeks that lead into a large pond.
There is a small cave also on that one side.
On the other side there are several small mounds of rocks. The were once much taller but have be weathered by time and the trees that grow atop them. There are large chunks of rock scattered across the ground, remnants of the once towering mountains. There are several small ponds also on the far side. connecting the two sides of the plot is a worn out path with bridges that are still intact.
Looking into the sky you will notice several floating Islands of various sizes.
All of this was built by me..... every single block......... :d so many.
Thank you ArcWraith for your idea/suggestion about improving my floating islands.

Sorry 'bout them typos,
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Posted Jun 16, 16 · OP
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Hello there Shameful_Zebra :)! First off, I'd like to say outstanding plot! There were a few places that I thought were odd, or needed more detail, but this was indeed a big improvement from your first plot submission.
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So first thing, I like how u blended the dirt and the stone! But the dirt under the stone looks a bit awkward.
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Next part to fix, this area seems a bit to flat to me! You could raise it up a bit.
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I want to point out, I love what you did with the bottom of the lake! But the top could use a few lily pads to detail a bit.
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This sky island seems a bit to low compared to the others! Maybe it could be raised a bit? Plus it could also use some flowers and grass.
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I like where you placed this waterfall, but something about it seems odd to me.

Overall, I love the details you incorporated into this plot! This surely could get Terraformer!
Good Luck :thumb:
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Posted Jun 16, 16 · Last edited Jun 16, 16
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I am glad you took the time to look at my plot! Thank you! :d
I am definitely going to fix those things.
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Posted Jun 16, 16 · OP
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Very nice plot! RyanDerpington did the review so I won't go into too much detail, except to say "good job!".

I liked this use of the new 1.10 blocks. We'll have to experiment with using these magma blocks as lava flowing down volcanoes - maybe see what you can do with it if you have spare time!
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The floating islands were relatively well constructed, but I don't feel they added very much to the overall build. They were a bit out of place.

You took on all the suggestions we made on your last submission, and using feedback is an excellent quality! I think you'll be a great new member of the MCAlagaesia team!

I've sent you a private message with more information. Congratulations! :-)
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Congratulations Shameful!
Posted Jun 21, 16
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